Pain(비교)

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-Oh, pain! Thy has dragged me into the darkest, deepest part of your inner soul.
-I compulsorily traced thee trace, reverse to my own vision and against and opposing to
-my will. I was cramped under thy weight burdening my own soul, causing me to sink
-deeper and deeper down the crust of doom, finally encountering overwhelmers to have
-me unconscious. I have begged, appealed to cease these leading to my ultimate; still have
-I been ignored wholly by your careless own. If thought, that is controlling my
-body to action, you were controlling my thoughts to initiate my body to your purpose.
+Oh, pain! Thy has dragged me into the darkest, deepest part of your inner soul. I compulsorily traced thee trace, reverse to my own vision and against and opposing to my will. I was cramped under thy weight burdening my own soul, causing me to sink deeper and deeper down the crust of doom, finally encountering overwhelmers to have me unconscious. I have begged, appealed to cease these leading to my ultimate; still have I been ignored wholly by your careless own. If thought, that is controlling my body to action, you were controlling my thoughts to initiate my body to your purpose.
-Oh, for the sake of god, that I do not believe, you may instantly discontinue this
-misfortune that I recently encountered! As the pain is too mighty for me to
-handle, as I struggle to survive, resist, and endure, idiosyncratically I am beginning
-to deep down to the swamp of never-ending nightmares that come to
-face me every dawn, however I would never be able to efface that memory
-off my brain.
+Oh, for the sake of god, that I do not believe, you may instantly discontinue this misfortune that I recently encountered! As the pain is too mighty for me to handle, as I struggle to survive, resist, and endure, idiosyncratically I am beginning to deep down to the swamp of never-ending nightmares that come to face me every dawn, however I would never be able to efface that memory off my brain.
-O mighty pain, do not let me be the floccinaucinihilipilification
-of thee, as present is already drowning out my blood out of my veins
-and ideality out of my head. I never intended to be your nemesis, as I have
-always lived with your own self and knew you were necessary for the useless
-me. But, now, pray leave me alone.
+O mighty pain, do not let me be the floccinaucinihilipilification of thee, as present is already drowning out my blood out of my veins
+and ideality out of my head. I never intended to be your nemesis, as I have always lived with your own self and knew you were necessary for the useless me. But, now, pray leave me alone.
-This overwhelming pain has already cut
-into my skin and reaching for my inner.... oh, it has saturated me with despair!
-oh despair – despair that makes me desperate to crawl out of this flooding
-pain. and then it would come — the drought — the drought of my feelingness
-and emotions and memory – all merged into a large group of negativity — which
-does nothing to me but to kill, murder, and crush me ’till my death.
+This overwhelming pain has already cut into my skin and reaching for my inner... oh, it has saturated me with despair! oh despair – despair that makes me desperate to crawl out of this flooding pain. and then it would come — the drought — the drought of my feelingness
+and emotions and memory – all merged into a large group of negativity — which does nothing to me but to kill, murder, and crush me ’till my death.
-Pain bruised and tore up my skin, exposing unprotected insides of me, and enjoyed
-it. Thy joy shuddered the meaningless world and crumbled; then broke my bones and
-powdered what was left of me. Blood splattered on either side of thee, yet you
-lacked conscience because it didn't exist in your science; Then you maintained your
-pain upon me and still intensifying, and at last the degree reached its maximum;
+Pain bruised and tore up my skin, exposing unprotected insides of me, and enjoyed it. Thy joy shuddered the meaningless world and crumbled; then broke my bones and powdered what was left of me. Blood splattered on either side of thee, yet you lacked conscience because it didn't exist in your science; Then you maintained your pain upon me and still intensifying, and at last the degree reached its maximum;
-I came to face the ultimate end that was waiting for me from the start — starting
-me every time you come to meet me, keeping me alive although I wanted death,
-however, making me conceive the pain equilibrium of grasping into the area of
-death, between the boundaries of life and death. I was weavered by own yourself.
+I came to face the ultimate end that was waiting for me from the start — starting me every time you come to meet me, keeping me alive although I wanted death, however, making me conceive the pain equilibrium of grasping into the area of death, between the boundaries of life and death. I was weavered by own yourself.
-If thy do not decide the end of this ongoing pain upon me, I shall finally fall off the
-cliff of life, into the descent of madness, which I am already seeming to suffer in
-concurrent realm, simultaneously desperately wanting, oh craving for escaping this
-roundabout that never seems to end, so that, I express my willingness to you,
-whom does not seem to fancy the idea of mine.
+If thy do not decide the end of this ongoing pain upon me, I shall finally fall off the cliff of life, into the descent of madness, which I am already seeming to suffer in concurrent realm, simultaneously desperately wanting, oh craving for escaping this roundabout that never seems to end, so that, I express my willingness to you, whom does not seem to fancy the idea of mine.
-There, I would want to break the
-eternal cycle of upturning wheel of pains of life, but as I am nearing the area of
-death, that is, the end of life, due to you causing me to, adjoining my side with
-the demon beside; I have crashed into the walls of fate, shattering my soul and body,
-yet without nourishment at all. Here may I end the assertion, for I am losing my
-mind every moment.
+There, I would want to break the eternal cycle of upturning wheel of pains of life, but as I am nearing the area of death, that is, the end of life, due to you causing me to, adjoining my side with the demon beside; I have crashed into the walls of fate, shattering my soul and body, yet without nourishment at all. Here may I end the assertion, for I am losing my mind every moment.